First Scene by Ed
Film club script
We see little p.o.v of a teacher shots looking into classrooms and a couple of tracking foot shots. All of this leads up to the detention room where we hear the pips go. The teacher gets the room ready for a detention. He picks up a box and gets ready to collect phones. We see pupils starting to arrive there are little speed up between each pupil putting their phone in the box. Then when everyone has arrived
Teacher: Is that everyone
Most of the pupils murmur yes
Teacher: Ok then I’m going to take these phones to my office
Pupil 1: sir. Are you allowed to do that?
Teacher: yes. It’s…its part of our new authority. (Saying this unsure)
Pupil 1: oh
We then see the door shut and a close up shot on a key locking the door for the detention room. We now see the time go by. We start to see chunks of the book (lord of the flies) get read by the boy at the back.Andthen the students realise sir has no came back.
Pupil 3: Is it me or has sir been away for a while.
Pupil 2: he’s properly lodged us.
Pupil 1: I’m going to see where he is.
Pupil then walks to the door and finds it is locked.
Pupil 1: it’s locked
Pupil 3: let me try
Pupil 3 tries to open the door but instead fails.
Pupil 1: told you
Then a pupil from the back of the classroom and gets up and knocks the door down.
Pupil 3: Oh that was easy
Pupil 4: let’s get out of this place
Everyone starts to gather their bags and head out the door. Shot changes and we see the pupils walk into darkness. We then see a growing amount of light from pupil’s phones.
Pupil 7: why are the lights not on?
Pupil 6: don’t worry about that. Where is the switch to them?
Pupil 8: here it is
Lights then light up. And pupil 4 runs up the stairs looking for Nina (receptionist)
Pupil 2: that was easy
Pupil 3: are we in school by alone.
Pupil 1: I think so
Pupil 4 is walking back down the stairs
Pupil 4: Nina’s not there.
Pupil 5: so we have the school to are self’s